Hmm...
Quite good for your first flash, even though you haven't included sound (yes i hav read the thing on the preloader and do know why you haven't) it's good b+w animation.
Gewd Luck with finding sound and Gewd Work!
Hmm...
Quite good for your first flash, even though you haven't included sound (yes i hav read the thing on the preloader and do know why you haven't) it's good b+w animation.
Gewd Luck with finding sound and Gewd Work!
Gah! I never really thought that anyone would bother to read it.. Haha.. Thanks for the review. ^^
ok...
PLEASE WILL SOMEONE MAKE A FLASH SHOWING YOU HOW TO USE A MOTION GUIDE.
this was a bit slow and to be honest screenshot's may have been more helpful, but good none the less.
incorporate difficult flash things into it, though.
Gewd Work and Gewd Luck with ur next flash animation.
Ok...
Great Animation, but...
the flash was way too short,
there was no plot,
and no music (that's your choice though)
To imporve it you could:
make the hair move less(at the moment it moves as if it were a symbol),
add a plot,
add expression and other movements to her, so it doesn't look like the wind is blowing a corpse back and forth,
the close up of the face moves too little in proportion to the amount of rocking of the chair.
Anyway, i think you have som4e real potential, so use it. I know good AND long flash animations take ages to make, but you have the potential, so do it.
Gewd Work and Gewd Luck with the next Flash!!!
Yeah...
Don't mean to burst your bubble, but...
i couldn't hear the voices'
the submission had almost no flash,
the file was huge,
and the quality was not the best,
PLUS this is a flash website - don't bend the rules by putting a moving sign in it. (BTW if it had flash i didn't see - i only watched the first part)
To improve this you could:
add flash (animate the music video, ANIMATE being the key word)
make it so people can hear the voices a bit better,
and use flash a bit more so the file isn't so big (reduce no. of pictures)
I thought that the music wasn't tto bad, but everyone here is sick of videos, FLASH ONLY PLEASE.
Gewd Luck with your band and Gewd Luck with the next FLASH ANIMATION.
There will be an animated one next time!
Ok!!!
I thought that was great!!!
i really liked the music;where did you get it and who is it by???
I don't really have anything constructive to add as that was a style that can't really be improved. The only thing that can be is maybe the animation in some parts. However i did like the very first part with the weird smiley faces, they were GREAT!!!!!
Gewd Work and Gewd Luck with the next collab!!!!
Thanks.
Sorry
I didn't see the whole thing, but what i can say is that it was good animation on the whole.
Quickie: It's worth while to read the NG FAQ and Literature, it gives you useful hints - i think somewhere it says that yuo can load a flash over another instead of putting it on again. Something like that (i think).
Anyway Gewd Work and Gewd Luck with your next flash (and the series!)
Great Job!!
You obviously have talent,with almost no room for improvement, i liked the use of the theme tune from 'Foster's Home for Imaginary Friends', how did you get it by the way???
Was it created for the show or is it just a piece of music associated with it???
Anywho, i think that random flash deserves to be on Newgrounds considering you only had 10 hours. I'd like to see more of this type of random flash; although i'm not sure how you can make another flash like this, as it can't really be turned into a series, oh well.
Gewd Work and Gewd Luck with the next piece!!
PS what grade/mark did you get???
Woah, when did this happen...what a mess; for now... P.S. ALTON TOWERS RULES...hehe! I reject your reality and substitute my own!
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